When I was in my senior year of high school, I took advantage of the Running Start program and spent that last year of high school taking college classes. One of my favorite classes was creative writing. One of the comments my instructor made towards the end of the semester, and he read several of my stories, is that my writing tended to be voiceless.
I knew what he said is true, but I have decided that because of that writing I am having trouble writing. I write in a matter of fact, just the facts, way instead of writing how I talk or think. It is good for reports or encyclopedia entries, but I think it isn't the best for fiction.
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